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the song's about a man's wife dying in a car crash and he thinks about the song he wrote her before pulls the trigger. thatms what the bang was


so... emo?

When someone you love dies you want to die too.
So arrogant of you.

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user Rhox has written
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the song's about a man's wife dying in a car crash and he thinks about the song he wrote her before pulls the trigger. thatms what the bang was


so... emo?


my fathers fiance died right next to him and he woke up with her dead right next to him, and attempted suicide.. many times, lol

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Nice Song. It's a bit too stretched out (I think). Also I think you should make it rhyme more or make Eminem sing it :P. Best of luck for your performance.

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A mindfuck means it fucks your mind.

This whole song fucks your mind. If you're not as emo as this Ecorp guy.

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Srsly, at least JB isn't RELEASING such emo songs.
Again, Baby and all those other bad songs are at least not EMO.

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This song needs:
• Less "forever and ever" shit
• More words that are not "forever" and "ever"
• Some sort of poetry like figures of speech or whatever
• More story behind it
• More story being told in the verses
• Less "forever and ever" in the verses raping my mind
• Shorter verses (not so hard now that you got rid of the forever and ever shit)
• A very very cool music track (pref. made by Daft Punk) so I'll dare to listen to it.

Except for what I wrote before, the song is good.

@Cuchilainn: OMG dude justin bieber is an experienced artist with a large traject... oh wait... he's not. But there's no need to compare this with his "baby baby" crap.

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Forever and ever, people will post crap. It's such a shame, fap fap fap..
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