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I disagree.
Partly.
From beginning to 0:50 it sounds pretty nice
From 0:50 to 1:15 the sounds is just a random mashup that doesn't fit.
From there on, it just repeats (which is definitely not good).
You might want to change the flow in song at least twice. Lets say the begining is pretty normal so the middle would go into a different beat which is slow and then fades out into a faster flow (faster that normal too). You should know that every music leads to a tension point where some crazy stuff starts happening. Your beat is the same during whole 4 minutes. I hope you get my point.
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user Aidsregen has written
much pathetic, often bad, search a bridge to kill urself pl0x.
tenks for le tempban.

Rageful troll detected.

@topic I didn't hate it but it is still improvable.

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First time when I see positive comments from this community about my work. Thanks for your opinions, guys.
And, yeah, it can be improvable because has some "bugs" and I stayed few hours to make this beat (aprox. 3 hours). Maybe, if I sitting more hours, it came out better.
Anyway, next beat will be better than this and, maybe, I'll remake this one.
Stay tune, guys.

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As someone said it is not bad until you mash up.
Whats the program name?
I have some melodies you would like to ear, i create my own music, no remixs but i think im never prepared to release theme, i like to mix classic with electro, like Jasper Forks - Another Sleep Night.
Sometimes im pround of my shit it almost make me cry. Ear your own music is amazing even when it is bad.

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First time when I see positive comments from this community about my work.
What else do you expect when your first rap beat is truely pure shit. People will all be like "dis is so horrible".

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As someone said it is not bad until you mash up.
Whats the program name?
I have some melodies you would like to ear, i create my own music, no remixs but i think im never prepared to release theme, i like to mix classic with electro, like Jasper Forks - Another Sleep Night.
Sometimes im pround of my shit it almost make me cry. Ear your own music is amazing even when it is bad.


For my beats, I use FL Studio 11. If you want, you can send me some of your beats to listen. I like so much classic music and a lil bit electro. I listened some of Jasper Forks songs and I think they are pretty good.
Maybe your beats are too.
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