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rzvthePsycho
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Heya us users !
This is my simple , cartoonish , knife arena map.
Contructive criticism is apreciated and don't criticize just by watching map export.
Enjoy!
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kerker
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Nice map! I like it.
I like it!

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Rainoth
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Nah the oasis is quite obvious, I always make such things when I'm using dust tiles, what I mean are the yellow things above it. There's 3 of them. The name is not a problem, I just wanted to know why u chose it (and apparently it's because of cartoonish look of tiles)

No prob.

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rzvthePsycho
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Hello.
Since this is an 25x25 map , what's a small map of course , i decided to upload a map export insted of images.

About the tiles; i'm not professional map designer and my skills into creating a map aren't the best ones. But as you said this map got the basics and is better than a lot of files on us.de. I know it looks weird i'll do my best to improve it as soon as possible.

The whole blue square thing is an oasis. Yes the computers dosen't fit , i'll fix that.

About name;
Because of the cartoonish look of tiles. If the name is a big problem i'll change it.

Thank you for your review and for your time regarding my map issues.

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Rainoth
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don't criticize just by watching map export

If you didn't notice, that's the only thing you provided for us to see about your map. Actually, the best way is to see the map export, makes no sense to ask the opposite.

It's very simple, you put in too many "different" ground tiles (grass, pebble, dirt, etc.) and the style is weird. I can also say that I can see how you took one tile frame and placed it everywhere (with rotations of course) then another frame and so on. Not much thought put into how you place them.
What are the square blue things supposed to be?
The computer is topdown while the laptop is isometric, which one is it? The computers dont fit with the map.

Finally, why is this ka_cartoon? What makes us think it's a cartoon, the simple tiles or what? Just genuinely curious.

Overall, it has basics in and I congratulate you for making something that could potentially stay in FA (which is a huge achievement) but it's not anything nice and lacks many things.

It's hard to improve small maps but ye... Good luck on your future projects.

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Masea
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@user THEMUD: Why you are asking question when you haven't read description? I lol'd.

Anyways, map does look nice.
I like it!

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THEMUD
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@user rzvthePsycho: I totally didn't take a look at the description. lol
I thought it was just a map for playing mixes or something like that.
I like it!

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rzvthePsycho
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Aham , "knife arena" , this map is playable only with knives. Well you can play it with weapons if you want but is not recommanded. Ts Spawn is in the "house" and cts are at crates , palms , and something what is supposed to be a cave.

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THEMUD
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@user rzvthePsycho: Oh if so, would you please inform about the teams' spots?
Because it seems so easy to random shooting from a base to another.
I like it!

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rzvthePsycho
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Thanks !
Well it's a small map for 1n1 or even 2n2 battles.
For a fast game.

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THEMUD
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Decent tiles, good box putting and nice computer.
I will drop down a like, but doesn't it look a bit small?
I like it!

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BcY
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I liked your idea,take the cookie. cookie
I like it!
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