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16.01.16 11:50:28 am
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Biusem
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Hello gentelmans and ladies! Today im here to present my first map! as the title says, the map is named de_secret nuclear! it contains: 2 bomb sites, one is protected by an soldier cause its nuclear! and the other one an ordinary bomb site, there is even a secret teleporter which gives you a (drum roll please) Laser!
Credits:
DC - tiles / forum
Yates - Fog lake idea
I hope those are all of them i don't know if i missed some.
√ You can use use it!
× Do not edit/upload with your name!

P.S. : Does it have any glitches? do you want me to add some extra things? tell me and i will try my best!
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edited 16×, last 16.01.16 04:27:08 pm
ok This file has been reviewed and approved by Sparty (20.01.16 01:00:20 pm)

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17.01.16 06:17:04 am
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Biusem
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@user omg: Sorry, didn't had enough joints and Mountain Dew, Next time ill get some more
17.01.16 02:43:58 am
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omg
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0/10 not enough dank airhorn
its actually not a bad map. thx babe
16.01.16 06:02:23 pm
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VADemon
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These tunnels are too long and give no cover at all. I can imagine this map to become a construction map with a few additions.
16.01.16 04:26:34 pm
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Biusem
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@user Ace Howl: Done mate, i enhanced it as best as i could!
16.01.16 04:04:14 pm
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Avo
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Filling the empty places with palms will never help you to take over the world.
16.01.16 03:45:13 pm
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Fraizeraust
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@user Biusem: I suggest you checking de_ maps of others (those with high quality, that's obvious). You'll notice the most important key is the gameplay and how the map is supposed to be a Defuse Bomb one.
16.01.16 03:35:03 pm
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Ace Howl
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@user Biusem: Logically, most of de_ maps have at least 2 paths which leads bomb spot or opponent spawn.

To improve your map (my opinoin):
1. sketch your map
2. tighten your path (2-4 grid)
3. a path should have:
- sufficient wall as barricade (not obstacle)
- another way that lead the same path
4. de_ map should be accessible from any side (yours have 1(?) path and... 1 way to reach bomb spot?
5. visualize your mind, imagine some players are fighting in that area, you should know what and what not to put.

Don't leave blank space especially when your map is small, it makes your preview image become difficult to understand

Relax and have a cookie cookie .
16.01.16 03:24:35 pm
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Biusem
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@user Fraizeraust: I dont know how to enhance it somehow... i do not know what to do.. i dont know if i should remove it or not
16.01.16 03:10:18 pm
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Fraizeraust
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I confirm same with user Rainoth. In a Bomb Defuse map should not have such extra spots for other things otherwise it's not a Bomb Defuse map at all.
16.01.16 03:02:27 pm
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The Grim Reaper
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now 2 likes
16.01.16 02:56:56 pm
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Biusem
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Thanks.. you are the only one so far.
16.01.16 02:46:38 pm
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The Grim Reaper
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i agree with Rainoth,about palms and open spaces.
oh and there is too much circle sand tiles.

but hay it is ur first upload
one for motivation.
16.01.16 02:39:47 pm
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Rainoth
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It's better than most first maps but it's bad. Really bad.
Less open spaces. Less palms. Don't spam palms, don't add random spots for extra weapons, this isn't Jail or a fun map or something.
16.01.16 02:39:26 pm
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Biusem
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@user Sparty: sorry, didnt notice them! the backround looks the same and the outside the map i tried to look for a spot for the secret room,i will edit it brb

edit: Done!
16.01.16 02:34:57 pm
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The Grim Reaper
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theres a sand tile missing,the two outside the map?



uh im not sparty.
16.01.16 02:31:33 pm
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Biusem
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@user Ace Howl: @user Sparty: There you go guys! Sorry for that, its my first upload so cut me some slack
16.01.16 02:23:17 pm
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Ace Howl
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@user Biusem has written:
user Sparty: Well how do i do it? :<
@user Biusem: "Editor" > "Tools/More Option" (wrench icon under "Save" button) > Choose Size before clicking "Export to Image" (1:1 recommended for resolution).


*sigh* I'm afraid to say this, but your map doesn't please someone. Most of your area are empty, either runny players or no juking spot, allows enemy to kill easily. Make maps smaller and lenghty walking distance, so that would take some time. -removed-

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Pardon me for giving negative statement, here is a like for your motivate you as user The Grim Reaper did. Make better next time √
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16.01.16 11:55:12 am
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Biusem
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@user Sparty: Well how do i do it? :<
16.01.16 11:54:34 am
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Sparty
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One useless picture is not enough, Try to put take the whole map.
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